If a user reads only the first screenshot and can't say what the app does in one sentence, you have a conversion bug, not a marketing bug. Format that works: big overlay text describing the value ("Track your training, no spreadsheet needed"), small phone mockup behind it. Most apps make the phone the hero. The text is the hero.
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Rewrite my App Store screenshot 1 so a user who reads only that one screen can say what [app] does in a sentence. Make the value-prop text the hero, like a big overlay reading 'Track your training, no spreadsheet needed', with a smaller phone mockup behind it. Give me 3 overlay headline options.